Concept 27

1. I think he should ask her in the school corridor between classes because it is a general area that can be used in another scene. Some might say doing it in a sketchy atmosphere would be better, but that kind of scene is obscure and would drive away the viewer into another directing than what what was originally intended. It also doesn't seem realistic that the transaction would take place in any other setting other than in school. The topic is in school there for the scene should be in a school setting.

I am sitting in a classroom environment.

2. INT. Day- Alex and Betty are taking a test in their film studies class.

Alex

Hey what did you get for number one

Betty

Be Quit, Alex you are going to get me in trouble

Alex

Come on, I would help you

Just tell me what it is

Betty

(loudly)

Fine it is...

The teach Mr. Schrieber interupts

Mr. Shreiber

What!!!!. Betty bring your test over here

Betty

But...

Mr. Schrieber

No questions bring it over here

Betty

See what you did

Alex

Sorry Betty

Betty walks over to the teacher with her head down and hands him her test. The bright classroom lights gleam at her disappointed face.

Mr. Schrieber

Wow, Betty you have just won the student of the year here at Gunderson High School

You don't have to finish your test just throw it away.

We see a sigh of relief on Betty's face.

3. INT. Day- A group of girls are walking in the double doors.

EXT. Day- A mean guy flirts with all of them.

INT Day- the mean guy turns into a Caterpillar

EXT Day- he has to experience life as a Caterpillar and learn to be good human being.

INT DAY- he finally blossoms into a beautiful human being