Concept 28

3. During my last birthday I had a sleep over with my friends and I went out to dinner at my favorite restaurant chilies.

INT Day My house- I got ready in my fanciest cloth and my friends came over.

EXT Day In my friends car- We drove of in my friends car blasting our favorite songs.

INT Day At chillies- We ordered our favorite foods and had great conversations.

EXT Day Grocery store-We drove to a local shop and bought ice cream and movies

INT Day My house- We watched movies and ate ice cream and had very feminen conversations.

Concept 27

1. I think he should ask her in the school corridor between classes because it is a general area that can be used in another scene. Some might say doing it in a sketchy atmosphere would be better, but that kind of scene is obscure and would drive away the viewer into another directing than what what was originally intended. It also doesn't seem realistic that the transaction would take place in any other setting other than in school. The topic is in school there for the scene should be in a school setting.

I am sitting in a classroom environment.

2. INT. Day- Alex and Betty are taking a test in their film studies class.

Alex

Hey what did you get for number one

Betty

Be Quit, Alex you are going to get me in trouble

Alex

Come on, I would help you

Just tell me what it is

Betty

(loudly)

Fine it is...

The teach Mr. Schrieber interupts

Mr. Shreiber

What!!!!. Betty bring your test over here

Betty

But...

Mr. Schrieber

No questions bring it over here

Betty

See what you did

Alex

Sorry Betty

Betty walks over to the teacher with her head down and hands him her test. The bright classroom lights gleam at her disappointed face.

Mr. Schrieber

Wow, Betty you have just won the student of the year here at Gunderson High School

You don't have to finish your test just throw it away.

We see a sigh of relief on Betty's face.

3. INT. Day- A group of girls are walking in the double doors.

EXT. Day- A mean guy flirts with all of them.

INT Day- the mean guy turns into a Caterpillar

EXT Day- he has to experience life as a Caterpillar and learn to be good human being.

INT DAY- he finally blossoms into a beautiful human being

Groundhog Day

This movie, Groundhog Day, uses a non linear structure by repeating the same day over and over again until the main problem is resolved. contrasting it to Run Lola Run, this movie also uses the method of repetition. The difference is that in Run Lola Run the repetition is only three times, but in Groundhog Day the repetition is numerous amount of times. Furthermore the main characters grow from the repetition and finally get the ending that they want. They are both amazing movies hat use non- linear structure to emphasize the change in the character.

Pilot Script #4

I really liked the news of her pregnancy and the surprise it brings to the reader. I also liked the anticipation that occurred at the end of the script. I think they should meet at a different place than a party like because it is overdone. I think they can work on the format, but it was a good script. I think they can also work on the flow of the script and make it so that the beginning is also interesting.

Pilot Script #3

I really liked the tension in the beginning of the script because it gives it a dark scene from the start. I also liked the transition that occurred for the main character. The dialogue was a little inappropriate and very unrealistic, but it did have a good relation with the characters. I really liked the end where he wakes up in the ambulance with his ex girlfriend. Overall it is a very well developed script.

6th Period Pilot 2

I loved the start of there script because it was an eye catcher. The placement of action in the first scene was really smart. I also liked the flashback they did and all the voice overs they had. It is nice to have a twist in the way you introduce the character and there main conflict in life witch is to find her way back to her normal life.

6th Period Pilot 1

I really like the love triangle going on between the friends. It did get confusing sometimes to keep up with the story line. I also suggest that the writers fix the description sections so that all the action is not in the description. I found the story line sort of interesting, but there are too many things going on for me to follow. Simplicity goes a long way.

Savina's Group Pilot

I really liked the story line it was very interesting. There was some grammar error but overall I liked the whole movie. I really liked the ending because it was unexpected and very interesting. It made me want to read more. I thing the situation with her parents was a little overdone and it had a weird ending with her parents agreeing. It was too quick of a transition from hating each other to agreeing.

Phyco

What we can learn from the screenplay of psycho is the unique way of telling a story. The stories structure is creative because the hero is killed off at towards the beginning of the movie which is not done in most movies. The characters are very unique because I have never seen a movie where the killer has two identities. The writer uses humor to describe how crazy the man was. He hint at things of the two identities before it is revealed. There is symbolism in the bird that represents being in a cage or being tied down.

Concept 25 #3

Will the cheater ever get caught?

How will the girl survive?

How can the kid find his parents?

Will the family ever be happy again?

How will he find his daughter?

Why would the girl kill her husband?

Will he ever find love?

How did she die?

Will he ever be a good guy?

How are they going to have a good time?

Who is behind the murder?

How will they get out of this island?

My friends liked these teasers because they are common and very suspenseful.

Critigue Pilot #2

1. I think the format is really good I give it a 3. I like how everything seemed to flow, but I suggest making the descriptions evened out so there isn't too much action in one description.

2. The characters are individuals and they each have their own way of acting. I give it a 2 because the main character should be analyzed more and described more.

3. I give the overall story a 2 because it was relatable and interesting to read, but the story line seems too redundant and over done.

I suggest that they should add some more dimensions to the next few scenes so that it becomes mysterious and unexpected.

Robby and Juliana's Scene

1.The format is a 2 for me because some times the exact location isn't given

2. The characters are 3 for me because they are very well developed and dynamic.

3. The story is relatable to youth today and very entertaining so I give it a 2 because it lacked flow and was a little wordy.