Tuesday, November 15, 2011

6th Period Pilot 1

I really like the love triangle going on between the friends. It did get confusing sometimes to keep up with the story line. I also suggest that the writers fix the description sections so that all the action is not in the description. I found the story line sort of interesting, but there are too many things going on for me to follow. Simplicity goes a long way.

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