I think that my best scene is the introduction and the character development, I pointed out my main character's strength and weaknesses well and also described the way she acts and what she likes and doesn't like.I think that the conflict and action scene could have been better my conflict could have been more developed and the actions could have been shown better. I would improve the adventure part of it because i think everything else was very developed and explained but the action and adventure went by really fast.
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