Great Student Writing

The student's writing was really good because they used a lot of description and told a great story. They used small details that made the writing very scripted yet still it told a good story. My writing I think is decent but still needs a lot of work. First semester we did a lot of free writes and descriptive wring. My favorite assignment was the one based on Kindred where we had to take it back to the slavery time period. My writing is improving in getting descriptive but i still need a lot of work on grammar and word using skills.